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Admiral Biscuit


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Oct
28th
2023

Story Notes: Periwinkle's New Car · 12:25am Saturday

Before I begin, I must thank AlwaysDressesInStyle for not only pre-reading, but also giving me the opportunity to write a story in his 16-verse (Car Wash-verse? Mustangs with Mustangs-verse?)


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"he’s an admiral. he outranks Lorem Faucet." —Posh
I'm just a humble squirrel, toiling through a boring life, and writing about magical pastel ponies.
The hard life pegasus among stupid bipedal cornstalk.
Ponies are for hugging, not yelling.
Axe body spray: confusing ponies since 1983.
"This was quite well written, and the characters had a very natural feeling back and forth. Shame I didn't like it at all."
Saint Admiral Biscuit, Patron Saint of Kirin
Life sucks, cuddle a pony, that’s therapy
Admiral Biscuit and the Horse Marines

I'm a little older than most bronies, but perhaps no wiser.
I'm detail obsessed. If I was one of the mane 6, I'd be Twilight.*
I work a blue-collar job during the day (with a blue shirt, even), and on the weekends I work at group homes.
When I'm not writing, I'm acting or practicing swordplay.
I'm terrible at bios.

I strive to maintain an open dialogue on all my stories and on my userpage; however, Comments that use inappropriate language or are inflammatory may be deleted at my discretion. Keep it civil, folks.

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*even the pony personality test agrees!
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It wouldn't surprise me. There have been some quality issues with parts we're getting from our ordinary suppliers.

Most of the pandemic cars are still under warranty and not our problem yet, but in a few years time we'll be dealing with them. Should be interesting. . .

If this is right, sounds like you might have a whole pile of fun in your future:

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You could find a narrative style where jumping all over makes sense. It's been done before, even in actual published fiction.

Or just practice different techniques to see if there are any which might work for you. Arrange each little snippet on an index card and then organize them in a sensible flow, for example. Write an outline first and stick to it--lots of possibilities that could work, if you really wanna write stories.

And if not, that's okay, too :heart;

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If i could WRITE without jumping all over id so do it

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Aug
4th
2013

Science! · 2:56pm Aug 4th, 2013

So, in the interest of determining how much ponies actually weigh, I decided to conduct an experiment.

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