Celestia was a mortal once. She had dreams and hopes. Like any other mortal being but has long since forgotten what it was like to be a unicorn.
As the generations have passed, she has grown to hate what she is. She has grown to hate the sun who made her immortal. She hated the voice she buried deep down, clawing its way up with dreams of blood-red infernos and fire.
She hates she listening to it.
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Very wize of her to realize such a thing
Celestia paused in her diatribe, and gazing off into the middle distance a moment, gave a decisive nod as her expression settled into a look of resolve.
"Okay. I'm going to going to go rutt myself addled on as many stallions as equinely possible."
"Cel... what!?"
"Yup, if I'm getting screwed so is everypony else. Out of the way altacocker or you get to be first."
There's a few uses of the word 'nobel' which unless I'm totally off the mark should be 'noble'.
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Thank you, I am not sure but I will look it up!
That was a good story goodluck with the rest of it.
It sounds like Celestia is on her way to being an Anti-Daybreaker. Like she wants nothing more than to destroy her sun.
Small nitpick, a generation is roughly 25 years. Enough for a pony to reach maturity and have a child of their own.
Now that Celestia's precious sister is back and is also afraid of the sun, I wonder how this will go.
Oh no. Daybreaker is winning.
Fascinating character study. Keep up the good work!
oooo~ I like where this is going! The building anticipation has me on the edge of my seat.
I am seriously loving the story you made! Very incredible! ^_^
Aye! This looks like one interesting story! I’ll give it a read.
In Blue's defence, nobody likes gold-diggers.
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Agreed, ol Blue may have been a dick, but Rarity isn't much better.
Hrm, interesting take to give the sun an actual voice. I was thinking this would be more psychological or involve Daybreaker. Not sure how this will go now.
*nobles, not Nobels.
Эй, почему у такой замечательной истории нет комментариев? (RU)
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Yes, at this point I have already written more than there is currently published so I am just sticking with the word change. Maybe I will fix it in the future but rn I am just writing this when I can. Thank u :)
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There are some in the later chapters :)
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Well, here, a genuine advice because not everyone is aware of this feature:
Ctrl+f, nobel, find and replace [with] noble.
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Thank u for the advice!
Мне определённо это нравится)
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Ой, да ладно вам, Daybreaker милаха. Лучшая поняшка!
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I love Daybreaker, but she isn't nice. She wants eternal day like Nightmare Moon wants eternal night.
Ну честно говоря не ожидал, что эта история окажется настолько хороша. Довольно хорошо показано, как у Селестии медленно накапливается раздражение и ненависть ко всему. В глубине души она осознаёт насколько на самом деле она могущественна. Понимает, что она может стать вечным тираном, что правит железным копытом и делает всё, что пожелает. Пони ждут от неё идеала, пони ждут, что она решит все их проблемы, долг которого она не желала сделал её слугой своего народа и Селестия это всё ненавидит и эта ненависть заглушает её любовь к своим маленьким пони и даже её родная сестра и верная ученица видят в ней лишь тот образ который вокруг неё был создан и когда нибудь эта ненависть может закрыть собой ту любовь которую Селестия испытывает к Эквестрии и всем её жителям.
Daybreaker своего рода воплощает все её тайные желания. Воплощает Солнце которое не укротить, на которое не повесить цепи. Солнце которое дарит жизнь всему живому и точно также может эту жизнь забрать.
Это действительно очень крутая и интересная интерпретация Daybreaker и Селестии.
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Thank you! Usually, people hate Celestia for just being perfect or not the emo sister but frankly I think her story had a lot of potential and I wish they actually made Daybreaker a real villain, like for the last episode or something of the series.
Oh. Oh my.
I hope Luna and her friends manage to banish Celestia.
Great stuff! This descent into madness is very well written.
This descent is actually so good. Amazing work.
Uh oh.