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When Twilight ascended it was all smiles and happiness...

The change hit some of the Mane 6 harder than others, and care needs to be taken to prevent things going in a very dark direction.

Can Twilight get over body dysmorphia? Will Pinkie ever be able to close her eyes again? Can Rainbow Dash prevent a disaster?

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She felt as though she could swat an Ursula Minor as easily as a bug now.

Swat an Ursula Minor? That you could Twi, that you could, too bad I don't know what that is (it's called an "Ursa Minor", not "Ursula").

Sigh, It's always nice to see the girls when they're friends being, well, friends

Wonder what's wrong with Pinkie... oh well, guess I'll find out!

...same Twilight?" Fretted Pinkie...

The "fretted" is capitalised, I don't think it should be.

"Good morning darling," she called out in a brightly cheerful tone, "could I have a cinnamon bun please?"

There should be a comma after "moring" and now I'm hungry for cinnamon buns :rainbowwild:

Oh no, Pinkie, you're makin' me think about things which Twilicorn never originally made me think of...

Pinkie needs a hug, real bad. :pinkiesad2:

Luna!! Hi, it's nice to see you, I just wish you hadn't brought up the whole alternate universe Twilight thing because that did not seem good.

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Ah yes... I'll fix that in post, as they say.

Wow,that was really good! You described everypony's perspective on Twilight turning into an alicorn very well. I'm glad they were able to help Pinkie work through her issues and I agree with Applejack, Pinkie could use some therapy.

This is great and sketchy as hell. What really happened here? The expression of Twilights strange, churning thoughts was pungent.

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