• Published 8th Oct 2023
  • 220 Views, 20 Comments

A Slave From Ponnheim - reedman



An enslaved human has magic. That's certainly a problem for the slave owners of the world.

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Final Entry

Stahl Huf Journal Entry 44

It is exciting to say that this is my last journal entry. I have spent the last few months, getting help translating it to Ponish. I have also sourced some of my old police reports on Nebel. A publisher from Baltimare wanted to turn my journal into a story. Many a pony around the world wanted to know about my little adventure. Safe to say, my retirement will be a comfortable one. Sternenblick, Nebel, and myself are all enjoying our new home. Nothing fancy. A nice house, not too far from the Seed family. Though usually I am by myself. Sternenblick and Nebel have taken to continuing the fight for equality around the world. Some countries had taken to segregating humans and ponies in public spaces. They still come by, but the house is mostly just me. I do not mind. The peace and quiet have given me time to focus on making my journal into a book. I hope whatever future generations reading this can be filled with hope. The hope that the world can change for the better, with the will of a single creature. I had a lot more inspiring words I wanted to write. To tell the truth: I am so very tired. I think I will rest for a bit. A nap without the threat of assassination sounds wonderful. I wish you all the best in the future.

Comments ( 18 )

The Holy Imperial Navy/Navis Imperialis, and Imperial Guard/Astra Militarum ( Formerly the Imperial Army of both. ), Adeptus Mechanicus, Officio Assassinorum, The Inquisition, Adepta Sororitas/Sisters of Battle, and Space Marine Legions/Chapters ( Adeptus Astartes ), of the Imperium of Man!!!!!

Would all like to know this particular planet's location; :pinkiecrazy:

11717160
This comment was so unexpected. I love it.

No idea why this is story is getting down voted. Apart from the characters having a change of heart very quickly it's a good short story

I think the down votes are from the milk drinkers unable to handle "controversial" words.

11717897
Appreciated. Character development is not my best.

11718038
I wonder how many disliked without reading.

11718060
As someone who gets downvote bombed by people who never actually read the story... That would be all of them.

11718217
We suffer together

Would it be ok if I write a fanfic for this story, kind of an AU thing?

11717897
Seconded.
Couldn't say it better myself.

11718264

That'd be epic

11718340
appreciate the support

I think the one of the reason for dislikes is how would a small human the size only reaching a ponys ankle be any help as a slave? Are the humans fully size? Toddler size? What size are they? Using your story picture as an example it makes things already hard to get into something so tiny would just be a rabbit or other small animal.

11719285
Fair point. Oh well

Well that was a good read. Shame about the downvotes.

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It's okay. I learned to ignore it awhile ago.

A good read to pass the time.

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