Twilight is a alicorn, but alicorns live far longer than a most creatures. What happens when death takes her friends one by one in a very short time? Is death really to blame or are there other forces at play?
Characters: Fluttershy, Rarity, Pinkie Pie, Applejack, Rainbow Dash, Princess Celestia, Princess Luna, Shining Armor, Princess Cadence, Apple Bloom, Sweetie Belle, Scootaloo, Zecora, Rara, Minuette, Vinyl Scratch, Tempest Shadow, Spitfire, Bon Bon, Braeburn, Lemon Hearts, Twinkleshine
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Chapters (18)
Damn, bitch dead
Ok
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Your characters die in most predictable and straightforward way. I get that you are going for shock value mostly, but there is literally nothing much more to it, not even a sadistic spin as a cherry on top.
But that might be just me, wanting a bit of showmanship. After all, I do not know where this is going
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You're far too kind.
I also suffer from a similar negative quality.
Oh no... Nevermind. I can't be kind at all so I'll tell the truth.
This is a story that is being written.
baby flurry heart
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Why are you saying this when you aren’t the one writing the story?
This fic hits different when you listen to this before reading each chapter:
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😆
What about twilight
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she’s still alive
That's horrible what happened to Fluttershy
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Yes but not as horrible as some of the others