I am but a simple brony who loves everything My little pony FIM
Please forgive me for being an absolute failure of getting this story done right. I keep putting myself in a dead end so many times now and once again I failed to get it right and have to start over.
BUT I PROMISE! THIS WILL BE THE LAST TIME.
Please forgive me for being an absolute failure of getting this story done right. I keep putting myself in a dead end so many times now and once again I failed to get it right and have to start over.
BUT I PROMISE! THIS WILL BE THE LAST TIME.
Sorry for the inconvenience everyone but I just want to let you know that later today I'm going to release an extension to chapter one and not too long after that a brand-new chapter two.
The invishimmer chapter will be taken down, but it will retun as in chapter four with a few changes, and more.
I'm just trying to get out everything about Sunset's character in the best way possible. As well as get all my ideas out properly as well.
I just want to say that I'm redoing chapter 2. I will keep the original up for now until the new version comes out.
The reason for the change is that I want to do things purely my way. I originally intended to make this story a more detailed version of the story InvisiShimmer as well as a continuation of that story. That is still the case of course, but I want to do things a little different for when Sunset goes to Fluttershy's house.
As the title says. I did some re-editing for chapter 1.
It's nothing major. I just removed the entire scene between Sunset and Sal and place it in chapter 2. Which will focus on the two's relationship.
Please forgive me for being an absolute failure of getting this story done right. I keep putting myself in a dead end so many times now and once again I failed to get it right and have to start over.
BUT I PROMISE! THIS WILL BE THE LAST TIME.
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To be honest I haven't started it until now, but it won't take me too long to rework the first chapter. (excluding the exposition one)
The first chapter will be the same with some additional content, and of course I'm doing things my way regarding the bat ponies history. I have big plans for them.
I'll try to get the new book out as soon as I can for, I am still working on other stories.
So how’s the rewrite of how Sunset Herd should had gone?
Thanks for the fave.
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Ok. Please let's me know.
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I took it down because I'm putting up another version. I know I don't have to, but I'm doing it anyway.
I want to get things that want out without constantly going back and changing things. This time I'm taking my time to plan things out. The story will still be the same with some new additions to each chapter, plus a brand-new chapter.
I plan to release the first 2 chapters once I'm satisfied with the results, if not 3 chapters all at once.