Unicorns Twilight Sparkle and Sunset Shimmer are the star students of Princess Celestia but the almighty Princess has other plans in mind. She sends the two dragon companions, Spike and Drake to Ponyville, to oversee the Summer Sun Celebration but instead, the two will have adventures of a lifetime.
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This seems really interesting, but the description confuses me a bit.
Do just Spike and Drake get sent to Ponyville, or do Sunset, Twilight, Spike, and Drake all get sent?
Oooh neat!
I know you used red-colored text to represent Sunset here, but since she was the only one speaking, and it was obvious that the one speaking was her, there really was no point. Additionally, red text is one of the hardest for humans to read for any length of time, since the eyes will naturally blur the red letters together.
My point is, you don't need to use colors to identify who is speaking, just for the sake of future chapters, and especially if you plan on using multiple colors for different characters in the same chapter; that's even worse on the eyes.
The actual content of the chapter was good though. Look forward to more!
Hum ok you got my attention.