French by birth, Soldier par choise and brony by the grace of Luna !
Imprisoned in a life marked by solitude and monotony, he sees his existence shift into a surreal strangeness. A new opportunity to become someone better and happier ? Or should he let his new Changeling nature and his new mother guide his life for better or for worse?
Be kind, I'm just starting... No, I'm kidding, be tough, that's how I learn !
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Interesting start. Look forward to more.
So, another broodmate of Thorax it seems
It’s strange that during his lifetime this character was not fired from his job for drinking alcohol before going to work.
Did I understand correctly? Did this character commit suicide before being reborn as a changeling?
It would be better if he died from overwork. (Unfortunately, this happens too often due to the fact that life circumstances force us to work three jobs almost without a break.)
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Speaking from experience (a colleague), if you don't work in an environment requiring contact with people and the work is done, they don't see anything.
Did this character commit suicide before being reborn as a changeling ?
Yes, I found dying overwork was less despairing. And above all, it is an element that will play a big role in these actions.
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nevertheless, in my opinion, suicide is the path of spineless weaklings who choose the easy path.
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This is why they have become a creature who steals love from others in a society based on violence and discretion.
If he had died from overworking, I would probably have reincarnated him as a noble living in Canterlot.
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a nobleman living in Canterlot? Why such luxury? Is this rebirth based on karma that improves your future life for suffering in this one?
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Everything depends on the reasons, in our time it is hard to judge someone.
Pretty good start.
Definitely would like more.
Definitely established for a payoff soon.
Thank you for the update!!
This isn't Thorax, is it? XD
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Nope
What will you do, Thunder?
I think this chapter works well enough to portray the events unfolding and the reason behind them. There isn't a point I think to myself 'Why exactly is this/did that/come to this' as the chapters behind this one answer those questions, and in this chapter, the key points of this scene are portrayed to convince the reader that this is plausible.
I feel like a lot of people connect 'a lot of text' with slow or decent pacing, with 'fewer words' with the opposite, but that is not the case here, it may only indulge in a few paragraphs for each key moment, but the sentences are more justifying their existence and relay all crucial information needed. In other words, it gets to the point.
Yes, this chapter did meet my expectations :)
I think it’s pretty good.👍
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I hope Mommy is proud of you, Thunder. You turncoat.
Ooh, I thought he might have tried to leave an olive branch’ with the Guard or Diarchs. But this could be quite a bit more adventurous.
Can’t guess what’s next.
This is an awesome story
Passive feeding hasn’t been discovered or isn’t a viable alternative? That does add a challenge and some risk. I like it.
Sometimes the changeling hive is depicted in the Badlands. Is MC from a different location or does he even know where the hive was? Does he have a food source for his adventures? The Badlands are rather sparse in population.
Hoping the story can truly start soon. All the story so far feels like an extended prologue to set the stage.