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Just a random story that popped into my head

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PhoenixFeather #1 · July 26th · 1 · ·

Unlike his fellow ponies, StarGazer had no wings to soar through the sky.

Summoning all the courage he could muster, he took to the skies and flew towards Ponyville,

These two lines seem to contradict each other. Other than that, I think this was a pretty good short story, and it gives a little more insight to StarGazer in the process. Whether this is canonical to the other stories, I couldn't rightly say, but it's a welcome addition to his narrative.

the star bringer

the star bringer #2 · September 7th · · ·

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Thanks for the feed back! P.s I've fixed the story error now

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