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FourShadow


"... okay, I have another plan!"

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This story is a sequel to Star Wars Episode IV, Rise of the Rebellion


The battle against the Empire continues for the Rebels, and many familiar faces start to emerge from hiding to join the Rebellion to fight. But as the Rebels work to build their forces, the shadow of the Empire continues to loom over them...

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 14 )

Go! Mighty Rainbooms!
They’re rising together to fight for what’s right everywhere!
Mighty Rainbooms!
Protecting their friends from the shadows of the evil Empire!
Rainbooms!

Warriors of justice and friendship
Rise! Mighty Rainbooms!
Attacking the masters of darkness with one mighty force!
Mighty Rainbooms!
Guarding the galaxy from all forms of danger and dread
Rainbooms!
Standing for freedom and friends

If I'm right, this is to the tune of 'Mighty Orbots'
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NFD-sNO0k_M&ab_channel=Charlotte247

They need General Kalani.

Good start to the story, Four! :yay: It was fun to imagine the business with the Rebels on Terra, and the ending return of old friends was another nice treat for sure. :pinkiehappy:

Ah, so another player takes the stage in this chapter... hoo boy. Hello, Adagio, fancy meeting you here... and with the bombshell regarding Derpy, this is really shaping up to be a reunion of your Clone Wars work.

Gonna be interesting to see where this all heads, that's for sure!

This was a nicely done chapter. I quite liked the opening look at / introduction to Midnight's apprentice. (Hello, Luster Dawn!)

Though I think that the real highlight of this chapter for me was the portion in the middle where the Jedi Six catch up and commiserate... particularly for Spike's part of the story about the dark days, and the time of the Empire. Poor guy. :pinkiesad2:

Arriving on Kijimi to look for Ackmena. What a way to bring two very different eras of Star Wars together. :yay: Fun to see Zorii Bliss in this section of the chapter as well, she was a character I rather liked from the movie. :pinkiesmile: As always, I look forward to seeing how this goes from here!

I really enjoyed the team's arrival on Ajan Kloss. There was some fun stuff, like in the Ithorian's shop, and then more serious stuff, particularly regarding the meeting with the clones - and then Derpy's standoff with Adagio. Wow. XD

Also, poor Lyra. She is clearly still carrying baggage from the war. Small blame to her really, but still... wish I could give her a hug.

What does the Star Wars version of Midnight Sparkle look like?

Could you show a picture of any Star Wars character or her actual character for the description?

Happy to have been able to help out, Four. :twilightsmile: This was an enjoyable chapter to see through. I particularly enjoyed the mix of Kijimi and the presence of a character like Ackmena in the setting :yay: :rainbowlaugh:

Lot of fun with the various character interplay in this one. Be it the Jedi Six, Zorii, or the bartender; the droids; and then, on the serious side of things, everything with the Inquisitors.

Looking forward to the next chapter and where things go from here! :pinkiehappy:

That was... Hard to read

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I cannot tell if it's from how I formatted/wrote it, or if you mean that in a good way in tone. :twilightblush:

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No, I mean the emotional feel was... Pure anger.

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... and again, I cannot tell if that's good or bad; was the chapter not fun to read? :twilightblush:

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Fun, no. Necessary, yes.

You’re making a grave mistake getting upset with them,” K2 informed. “Perhaps you should tell them how you've been feeling before your emotional state deteriorates and you chase more of your friends away."

K2's second sentence needs to be italicized here. Just a heads up.

Other than that though, not a bad chapter at all!

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