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Starlit Snuggles

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Ever since you ended up in Equestria months ago, you've been living in Twilight's castle with her, Starlight, and Spike. During that time, you and Starlight have become amazingly great friends, and have discovered several activities you both enjoy. One, however, is more prevalent than others.

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6-D Pegasus

6-D Pegasus #1 · August 4th · 2 · ·

Aww cute

TheStallionofDarkCavalry

TheStallionofDarkCavalry #2 · August 6th · 1 · ·

This is a pretty short and wholesome story, and the exposition around these two's friendship history is pretty cute. Plus, your literature uses a great variety of words to keep it from going static, and fun fact: I think this is the first time I've ever heard this phrase:

As Spike put it, you two got along "like a house on fire."

One criticism I have is that I feel there's too much exposition and not enough dialogue between Anon and Starlight surrounding their friendship. All these moments between Anon and Starlight that are described about them meeting each other, getting to know each other, and bonding through activities they enjoy, are all some very good setups to some other stories where I'm sure their interactions would give the reader a nice experience.

Basically, I would have liked more present interactions between these two rather than just have most of it be explained to me in exposition.

Still, it was a good read.

ChuckySkullHead