This story takes place during/after the episode "Fame and Misfortune"
And is written as more of a "what if" scenario. If the protests outside of rarity's boutique got too much to handle, and business went down the drain.
Thanks to Lavender Bloom and Diamond Cutter posting a review of the friendship journal, alongside other highly known book critics.
This caused Rarity to jump down the deep end, and take revenge on the couple.
this story was inspired by the Artist BlisAzalisDash and her drawing "stress sewing" the speedpaint of which can be found on Youtube :)
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wow, rarity's move at the cafe was smooth
i just wonder what happened in that week
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I would love to write up more stories for this little project.
But my main worry is it'll take away from the main story if i add more to it haha.
Im glad you liked the story though :D
This was satisfying. Well, mostly. Except for seeing Daisy (that Derpibooru insists on pretending she's a different mare puzzles me) getting tortured and killed. Her words weren't nice, but she doesn't deserve that just because she foolishly decided to impress some stallion she fell in love with by trying to be as snobby as him.
But aside from that, the general sentiment here makes me feel satisfied. And Rarity is a good psychopath and murderer, that role oddly fits her. I enjoyed this portrayal of her.
There are a few grammar and style issues here (and the end of the story makes it seem like you have gotten exhausted from writing it, as the errors substantially increase there), you definitely have quite some things to learn as author, but the grammar is also far better than I expected it after reading the description (did you, perhaps, write it right after you wrote the whole story?) and I definitely see potential to grow and to become a great pony horror author in you. And pony horror is my favourite genre, so I will follow you and see where this potential leads you.