• Member Since 20th Apr, 2023
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Beyond_Gold


I’m a superhero!

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A Creature enters into equestria at the worse possible moment.

Tirek, Cozy Glow, and Chrysalis have started their attack. The ponies have already lost their magic and the elements have been destroyed. Can this Creature help save equestria or die trying.

But something isn’t right about this creature.
Could it be from Tartarus?

Note from yours truly: “this is purely experimental. I don’t care if it does good or bad. I’m still trying to get better at writing.”

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 3 )
Haver #1 · 6 days ago · · 1 ·

More good

You got some grammar issues. That and the blatant murder seems a bit much.

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Blah blah blah. Like I said in the description. Experimental story.

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