The worldbuilding is based on Equestria at War, this takes place in my alternate timeline, Smoky Skies.
It is early 1004 ALB, a few months after the catastrophic defeat of the changeling Heer during the 1003 invasion of Equestria. Queen Chrysalis is dead, leaving nothing but a power vacuum behind.
The situation is dire, a military junta sized power in Vesalipolis to bring some order to the streets as society started to break down. Tensions are brewing as communists and “monarchists” start to chafe against each other in the streets, and one wrong move could spark an all-out street war. Meanwhile, the remnants of the Queen’s Guard lurk in the shadows, unwilling to accept anyling usurping the power and authority of the queens. Outside the great hive-city, Queen Argynnis and Vraks have left the Changeling Union, and the other queens are seriously entertaining the idea of doing so as well.
The junta and the republic have their strongholds, and their troops keep some semblance of order. Yet despite all their efforts, Vesalipolis is on a knife’s edge, and it’ll only take one wrong step to make the streets run with blood.
(PS, if you any idea for a good cover image, I’d appreciate that)
Seems like a fun idea. You can make an art in any AI art generator nowadays, so it shouldn't be a problem
Best of luck with your writing!
Then why do you post it, rather than finish it in peace and post it when it's done? It's a fanfiction site, not Bethesda.
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To put it bluntly, I realised that it could be a lot better, so I decided to edit it while it was still being approved. Didn’t wish to risk unsubmitting it, and now I am embarrassed. Releasing it like it’s Starfield was never my intention, and I’m sorry.
And as a side note, i’d imagined that it’d sit in its own corner of the internet, and not get noticed, so since I expected like ten people to see it in 3 years, I feel like I’d have any pressure if it did get approved while it was 10% away from completion.
great start mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter
