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Accurate Balance


Creativity is overrated, as was I.

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(Not related to other Pale Towers from any others' work. It is purely a coincidence.)

Today is Rainbow Dash's first mission day after she joined the Department of First Contact at the Pale Tower. She can barely contain her excitement as she opens the door to the briefing room. Here comes Rainbow Dash!

Oh, wait, she needs to go by "Fuse" now, because there is another Rainbow Dash on the squad.

And two Twilight Sparkles, two Scootaloos, and one Fizzlepop Berrytwist.

Perhaps some extra context could help.

 

Time. A river that rushes silently, diverged by a thousand mile at minimum disturbance. A tree that grows downwards, sprouting a lively branch from tiniest split. A field that brims with golden crops and offers the most valuable grains of infinite possibilities.

A Brief Introduction to the Theory of Beyond Everything, authored by O1-01-01 "The Derp"

 

Because we seek. Because we love.

We are the Pale Tower. We pursue the endless reserve of knowledge through the multiverse. We spread love and tolerance across myriads of you and me. We discover and explore new worlds, so that we can have friends everywhere beyond the limit of time and space. Walk with us, and you will be presented a new life of challenges and opportunities.

We want you. That includes every one of "you".

 


 

"The adventure story of a Rainbow Dash with the awesomest mecha-wings in all worlds — starting to sound a little bit cliché, isn't it? What if I tell you she has on her team Dash the archmage, Scootaloo the doctor, Scootaloo the Wonderbolt, two Twilights and one Fizzlepop?"

— AMO, former content moderator at FimTale

 


 

This story is, to a degree, inspired by The League of Sweetie Belles and Songs of the Spheres by the talented GMBlackjack.

Thank you, Utopia, for supporting me and help me conceptualising the story. It became true only because you've been here.

Also, huge thanks to Ladetaw, Sunsight_Skytech, and Lucent Starscape, for proofreading the original story!

 


 

This is a complete work that only needs to be rewritten in English, so as much as I welcome all criticisms and suggestions, I sadly can only make very little changes to the plot and characters. Open fire on my writing skills and style, then, my dear readers.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 3 )

Very nice! I'm looking forward to more

So both team include a smart fella and a huffy berserker, and some one in the middle. Props to Crepusca for being a smart leader!
Wonder why you put Fuse, Doc, and Prism to the other side because their expedition doesn't seem to have found anything.

As Timelight wasn’t able to see the sun, she sounded genuinely surprised. [Normally, the Princess Celestia of a worldline wouldn’t make so big a mistake, and even when she is in an inconvenient situation, the sun would be assumed by Princess Luna, keeping the regular period of daylight. Take this, and put it with how this empty Ponyville shows no hints of searching attempts nor of large-scale migration, we arrive at two plausible hypotheses.]

And I just love it when characters commence on these logical deduction stuffs. It engage the readers in thinking together with them, lest they get bored form the sedentariness of watching the story roll out without a sense of participation.

Comment posted by Accurate Balance deleted October 4th
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