Time to write some fanfiction! Yay! If you have any thoughts comment! I find reading them fun!
Twilight finds her way into the changeling hive. She has lost everything, her country, her family, her friends. But she has one, final act of defiance for Queen Chrysalis before the end.
An entry in Imposing Sovereigns IV, using the prompt Princess Twilight/Loyalty.
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Oh, now Twilight's done it. Chrysalis will skip the monologing and just kill her the next time they meet.
Did she just run away or give up?
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Neither.
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Hey! You can't have a villain without the self-promoting monologue thing, ya know! It's kinda written in stone.
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Well then what did she do? (Yes, I did read the story. I still don’t get it.)
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She showed the changelings where Chrisalis' priorities are.
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Indeed! (And decided not to commit a minor genocide.)
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Considering Twilight just exposed her for the self-serving bitch she is, Chrysalis might just skip it anyway in her fury if the hive kicks her out.
Ultimately a very tough choice to keep in war, very nuanced and hopeful at the same time. Definitely worth exploring in something longer and more detailed, but it was nice to have the tug of war in between what Twilight had lost and what she was about to take.
Thanks for writing this Jhoira
I can understand rating Teen out of an abundance of caution or for a more mature audience, but warning of Violence and Death in a fic with neither actually happening seems to me to be a little dishonest.
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I dunno, I'd say that the threat to blow up a hatchery would fall under violence. And the wiping out of Equestria would be a lot of death.
Wow amazing
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To my understanding, warning tags are specifically for things that go beyond what the show does, and the show had all sorts of threats and even timelines where Equestria was at war or wholly destroyed shown. It's a good point on the detail Twilight goes into for what she would do to the hatchery, as it's beyond the show and akin to if she really did it, but I really think the "Death" warning just for merely taking place in an Equestria where ponies died, without any detail on what happened, well within the show's TV-Y, is excessive.