Twilight gets a full time job since she is in massive debt, the bank threaten to take her house away, and the Mafia is on her tail, she finds a job on the internet as a cashier in Sugarcube Corner, ran by Pinkie Pie. As the days and nights go by, Twilight notices sinister things happening all the time and notices her co-workers dissapear.
Will Twilight stop who ever is doing these sinister things? Who is behind these sinister things?
Read to find out!
Thanks to God for helping me write this.
Chapters (3)
... She's a god. She threatens other people, not the other way around. The bank should be bending over backwards to help her, and the Mafia should know better.
Why can’t Twilight get help from her friend Discord or the princesses?
Interesting chapter
The pacing is a little bit off, it goes way too fast, and there is no good description.
I’m sorry, but I do not like this
Good chapter
Good chapter
I think the limitations of the 'Tagging System' here on FimFiction is hurting this fic.
If there was a sub tag option, where you could specify what type of comedy. Or just use unlimited tags.
Sigh.
Regardless I'm gonna assume that you like Abridged series and parody in general.
I love the rapid unpredictable comedy. Even the small amount of grammatical and spelling mistakes help. It lends to the idea of an author rapidly scratching down the latest ideas before the new torrent of jokes and oddities come to mind.
So yeah this really reminds me of when I try to write comedy myself!
Thanks for chapter one. Imma read more now.
(This might just convince me to actually start doing comedic readings of stories. I've only wanted to do this for years and years. So look out for me badgering you about that!.... maybe?)
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Hmm...
I think combined these to concepts answer everything.
"She threatens other people"
"Discord or the princesses"
So it's implied Twilight has a slight villian. streak.
So it's implied that Discord is NOT a princesses.
So it's obviously Discord in a wig trying to identity theft the newest Alicorn to become a princess.
Wow.
Wow oh wow.
That's genius; this explains everything.
We've all done wonderful work today uncovering this mysterious thing with the power of friendship.
Ps. I'd spoiler tag this (cos I'm nice like that) but I forgot how (cos I'm dumb like that)
I don't know why but this line just goes so hard for me.
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Ok, how did she say it? Did she say it with emotion in her face or did she say it annoyed?
You give us nothing to work with you, rarity says something and then that’s it, no emotion whatsoever.