Hello I’m a dragon that wants to make others happy. That’s it lol.(image is from yugioh baby dragon is cute)
The Writers' Group54,967 stories ·9,173 members
I Just Want a Comment15,220 stories ·3,596 members
The Shameless Self-Promotion Bureau48,053 stories ·5,375 members
The Official Generation Five Site769 stories ·633 members
The Share Center3,263 stories ·594 members
The Insane Creators Guild1,910 stories ·631 members
Generation 5 Group296 stories ·311 members
Hitch makes the decision to leave Maretime Bay. His son had been kidnapped by a mare he thought he could trust, mares he thought he could trust all but forgave her, his son was almost killed by some crazy alicorn.
(This is a complete retype of two stories. both Unforgiven and Betrayal Broken Bonds.)
Page generated in 0.041 seconds
Total duration
1,085 users online
161,872 hits today, 2,537,618 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2023
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2023 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Holy moly, Sparky finally got his own character tag now!
Hitch is going to get into a greater danger is entering the land that is not known to have
Sweet!. I'm glad Sparky got his own character tag
All those who Wonder are not lost I want to wear the stories going to go
I'm not surprised that Make Your Mark had Hitch forgive Misty all too easily—hell, they didn't even let him be as angry and scared as he should've been when Opaline was killing Sparky in the finale. But I do feel like it's a big missed opportunity for an interesting and realistic conflict between Hitch and Misty, and even him and the rest of the girls for having an easier time forgiving her. I would've loved to have an actual debate or conflict about if The Mane 5 could really trust Misty again or not. Such a shame the finale didn't allow that in favor of just hitting the plot beats they needed to hit, but I'm glad to have great stories like this one explore the idea!
It's definitely super upsetting to see Hitch leave Maretime Bay, but doing so to protect Sparky is just about the only reason I could see him doing such a thing. I can't wait to see the story continue for the next chapter!