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Zubric


Love to write whatever comes to mind and enjoy Brony stuff.

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Wheatley, a core from Aperture Science never thought that he would ever see the Earth up close after being banished, doomed to float around the moon forever. That was however until magic got involved and a special unicorn pulled him down to earth. Well, not exactly Earth, but it's a new home at least.

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Curious story you present. I'm intrigued to see where you take it.

Hmmm. This looks like it could be an entertaining story. REALLY liked the main group's first encounter with Wheatley (he's obviously calmed down about being called a moron if he is openly calling himself that, even if he's trying to trick the Mane 5). And Opaline has encountered the Space Core? Yikes.

Of course, I have to ask, if this one is before or after Misty reformed and joined the main group. If it's after, then the main group already knows about Opaline. But that's only a minor detail for later other than maybe Misty giving the group the info on Opaline meeting the Space Core.

But, anyway, the exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up are well done and I'm certainly looking forward to more of this.

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Most of the chapter was written before I had even watch Chapters Four and Five. So I am unsure where in the timeline it would belong. to be fair, I still have to figure out what exactly is special about Wheatley and Space Core. Opaline is more for magic, not tech

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